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I NEED YOUR HELP!! Can you correct this text, PLEASE????

We are making a projet 4 university and we must to write some text in english...can you correct this text??? (our prof. suggest us to use internet and forum to do that, he does't give us a grade for our english!) THANK YOU!! "I don't know this shop for a long time, I discover it a few months ago, but I jet love it! Here I can find a lot of funny t-shirt, blouse, shirt, skirt, trousers...and not only for under 44size!!! There's both casual and very elegant clothes and some accessories (Mussoni foulard, or Gucci bags and belt) and shoes (from Sergio Rossi, for example): the most brand are italian brand (more or less well known!). It is a little expansive, but it's worth!" (if you've got some suggest..thank you!) The shop-assistent is very kind! (is it right?) Thanks! Lily K...you're an angel! Thanks! Stitch..smack! You're all very kind....thank you so much! There's another text..you're so kind and..please..can you correct also that?? "Hi guys!! I'm an Italian Fashion Student and I’d like to tell you about my style…. I haven’t the same look everyday, but I don’t change it for the place where I go! When I wake up in the morning, I open my armchair and choose the outfit according with my mood… Sometimes I’m casual and sometimes I’m very smart&elegant, but the “red-wire” of my outfit is the matching. I can’t wear something that haven’t colours correct matched with all the other clothes and accessories that I wear!"

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1. Here is a literal translation: I haven't known this shop for a long time; I discovered it a few months ago, but I just love it! Here I can find a lot of funny t-shirts, blouses, shirts, skirts, trousers...and not only for under 44size!!! There's both casual and very elegant clothes, and some accessories (Missoni foulard, or Gucci bags and belt) and shoes (from Sergio Rossi, for example); most of the brands are Italian (some well known, others less well known!). It is a little expensive, but it's worth it! And the shop assistant is very kind! Here's a possible version: A few months ago, I discovered this shop, (insert shop name), and I absolutely love it! This boutique offers both casual and elegant clothing, including some accessories -- Missoni foulard, Gucci bags and belts -- and fabulous shoes such as Sergio Rossi. At this shop, you will find funny T-shirts, blouses and shirts, skirts and pants... and not just for the under 44 sizes!!! Most of the brands are Italian, both famous designers and some less well known ones. It's a little expensive, but worth it!! (And the shop assistant is very nice, too!) ~~~~~~ Thank you for the compliment! Here is your second text, my version of what I believe you are trying to say: Hi guys!! I'm an Italian Fashion Student and I’d like to tell you about my style…. I do not have the same look everyday, but I don’t change it depending upon where I am going! Instead, when I wake up in the morning, I open my closet and choose the outfit according to my mood… Sometimes I’m casual, and other times I’m very smart & elegant, but my one rule in choosing my outfit is that each item must coordinate well with all the other clothes and accessories that I am wearing that day. I never wear an outfit that has mismatched colors! (Edit: in my first help text, you may wish to say Missoni scarves instead of Missoni foulard)
2. I haven't known of this shop for a long time. I only discovered it a few months ago, but I just love it! Here I can find lots of funny t-shirts, blouses, shirts, skirts, trousers and not just for under size 44! There are both casual and very elegant clothes and some accessories (such as Mussoni Foulard and Gucci bags and belts) and shoes (from Segrio Rossi, for example). Most of the brands are Italian, both well known and lesser known ones. It is a little expensive, but it is worth it! The shop assistant is very kind!
3. I recently discovered a fashion shop, and I have fallen in love with it. They have a wide range of funny t-shirts, blouses, shirts, skirts and trousers...and even cater for sizes over 44! There are both casual and very elegant clothing styles, as well as some accessories (Mussoni foulard, or Gucci bags and belts). Also, there is a selection of shoes (with brands such as Sergio Rossi). Most of the brands are Italian (both famous and less well known). It is a little expensive, but I feel certain that it's worth the price. The shop assistant is most helpful and attentive.
4. I didn't know about this shop before, I only discovered it a few months ago, but i just love it! I can find lots of great t-shirts, blouses, shirts, skirts and trousers, and not just at size 44!!! There is both casual and very elegant clothes and accesories (Mussoni Foulard, Gucci bags and belts) and shoes (from Sergio Rossi, for example). The majority of the brands are Italian and more or less well known. It is a little expensive but worth it!!
5. Hi, I have made amendments to ALL of your texts that you needed help with. They are in CAPITALS. I hope you like them. Good luck in your university project --------------------------------------------------------------------------- "I HAVEN'T BEEN TO this shop for a long time. I discoverED it a few months ago, AND I JUST love it! IF YOU ARE LOOKING FOR SOMETHING DIFFERENT AND UNIQUE, I HAVE fOUND alot of funny t-shirtS, blouseS, shirtS, skirtS AND trousers AT THIS SHOP, and not ALL OF THE CLOTHING SOLD AT THIS SHOP IS under A SIZE 44!!! ThIS SHOP SELLS both casual and EVENING WEAR. THEY EVEN SELL accessories MADE BY Mussoni foulard,AS WELL AS Gucci bags and beltS). IF YOU ARE AFTER SOME shoes (from Sergio Rossi, for example) THEN THIS SHOP IS THE PLACE TO GO! AS YOU CAN SEE, THIS SHOP MAINLY SELLS italian brandS (BOTH THE well known AND LESS WELL KNOWN ITALIAN BRANDS!) It is a little expEnsive, but it's DEFINATELY worth IT!" --------------------------------------------------------------------------- The shop assistAnt WAs very kind, ATTENTIVE AND EXTREMELY HELPFUL! -------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Hi guys!! I'm an Italian Fashion Student and I’d like to tell you ALL about my FASHION style. AS MOST OF YOU WILL KNOW, I DON'T LIKE TO WEAR the same look everyday, YET I don’t change MY LOOK TO SUIT the place where I AM goING! When I wake up in the morning, THE FIRST THING THAT I DO IS open my WARDROBE and choose the outfit according TO THE mood THAT I'M IN. Sometimes I FEEL LIKE WEARING SOMETHING casual, and OTHER TIMES I WEAR SOMETHING very smart AND elegant. The MOST IMPORTANT THING I ALWAYS CONSIDER WHEN CHOOSING THE outfit THAT I WANT TO WEAR is THAT IT ALL NEEDS TO BE matching AND CO-ORDINATED. I can’t wear something that DOESN'T COMPLIMENT all OF the other clothes and accessories that I AM wearING; THAT IS WHY I BELIEVE THAT ALL THE COLOURS NEED TO MATCH CORRECTLY!"
6. Hi guys!! I'm an Italian Fashion Student and I’d like to tell you about my style….I wear a different look every day, but I don’t change it to suit the place I'm going! When I wake up in the morning, I open my wardrobe (NOT armchair!) and choose an outfit according to my mood… Sometimes I’m casual and sometimes I’m very smart & elegant, but the most important thing to me in selecting my outfit is the art of colour matching and co-ordinating. ('red-wire' has no meaning in English.) I can’t wear something unless it is colour co-ordinated with all the other items and accessories I plan to put with it!"
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