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Need your help. Is this a good way to ask an ex that im still in love with to marry me?

Basically I love this girl so much i cant breathe when things between us are going wrong at all. But everytime i see her i feel whole and its the only time i can be myself. Ive loved her ever since i first layed eyes on her and havent stopped since. She still has feelings for me and has told her friends so but we dated for three years and she wants to make sure things are for sure i guess o and just FYI I was the best boy friend a friend could ask for so its not like im trying to prove myself thats actually a disadvantage cause ive been so good to her already:( but now she is starting to like the 2nd guy since weve split and ive been acting like i dont really like her like i used to even though i think she can see through it i havent actually told her how i feel. Now im worried i might not ever get the chance b.c. shes told me she wants to be forward and she likes this guy. But everything in my heart body and soul tells me we are still meant to be. I literally cant imagine a future without her and mind you weve been split for almost a year... So my question is basically can you please give me your opinion on this idea especially the ladies! But basically im thinking reciting this poem to her in front of her and first telling her a lil bout how i feel then just asking for one last chance to hear me out. I plan on trying to also have most of our close friends and family present so that im declaring my love to her in front of all of them. So basically heres the poem. remember i will be saying it. Could it be that the one that I counted on for forever and a day Can simply walk away? I can’t deal with this anymore Can’t just pick up and clinch my fist anymore I’ve told everybody in my life That I just can’t live without you by my side Real quick I want let you to know this will be the last time So please let me go ahead and tell you this please don’t cry Afterwards you can seal it with a kiss. Let me see how can I put this so she knows???? HERREE IT GOES….. See the problem is that I knew youll never understand Now I know that youll see that im the man The only way I can explain this is Every time im with you….im me And every time im not….. thats the only thing I cant be I’ve gotta tell you before it done for good If I had a chance to go back and change anything Theres not one thing I would Yea id still show you what its like to Have somebody who lovessss you. Id still give you that bear That goodnight kiss yea itd still be there Id hold your hand at the doctors every last time Afterwards id still go home and cry Id stay up late thinking about what I got myself into Then id wake and hope I get to see you Id listen to you about your dad Id still Try to make you forget the past you’ve had Id sell all my old collectible wrestlers Just so I could get a Christmas gift that showed how much I loved her We would still stay on the phone Until the other one was home Making sure your safe and tucked away Id never miss any of your best friends plays Make sure to make all our days our the bestest days I’d still laugh at each and every funny face We be jumping around and wrestling all over the place I’d stay on you about those grades Even if it meant you’d hate me all day today I’d still buy you the roses with the yellow and red Cause it stands for friendship and love And you know we were always best friends But most of all i’d still get lost in those beautiful blue green eyes They make it feel like you can stop time My heart cant give up on you But believe me it tries I stare into those beautiful blue green eyes And I see the future Me you a house and kids Please tell me you remember this But, now a days….. I still try time and time again To tell myself to forget about just a friend I still know you and I are meant to be You have everything I need Without you my heart is truly empty But with you my souls complete I still know that we’d have the world’s cutest babies And that they’d like me more baby I still know you are my everything And we can erase all this pain I still know we can write history If only I could get you to kiss me I love you from the depths of my soul Wanna hold your hand when were old Everyone tells me im crazy That I can do better To just give up, you aint coming back to me That ill never have you NEVER Well I don’t believe the things there telling me I believe in romance and dance I believe in giving prefect one more chance I may not be the best I have flaws many you kno the best But I do do know one thing I LOVE YOU MORE THAN THE REST I know I need you to please Don’t give up on me I need you to believe I know its scary The chances of success are real barely And what happens if it don’t work out Well then what your doing now will always be around I know I don’t want to take the chance or shot in the blue I know Ill go away live happy if I get one more chance with you. So even though there’s a lot I know There’s still one thing don’t It happens to be the question that’s most important to me For this god I use my last wish Ill have to start it off by getting on one knee I can’t believe I’m doing this I then ask you the following question Stephanie Will you please marry me You can seal it with a kiss! To the answers that have already been given: Thank you also just so you know we have been split for a year but weve still hung out like 24/7 most of the time and as recently as last week she was saying how she wants this and that and all this stuff when she gets older and i was like"you better marry someone who is rich" and she said"you better get rich then huh" she always mentions how we are gonna get married one day but as soon as i get interested she backs up again.....

Public Comments

1. yep. run fast.
2. I think that's absolutely amazing!!! Good luck!!! :D
3. It's very wordy. And from your story, your chances of a 'yes' are a little on the slim side. If she's starting to move on, you need to eith er do the same or shorten the poem a little so as to minimise embarassment if all goes to pot. Try a sonnet: fourteen lines and the typical love poem of choice.
4. it's a nice thought, however, I think you should first try to mend things with her, you reading this poem can either go wonderfully or be a disaster unfortunately. If it has been a year she might have moved on, remember I said might have.
5. that is to cute! yes go with that! but other than that....your whole first paragraph should be told to her...verbatim! the reason she is starting to like this other guy is because you are acting like you don't feel the way you feel! and because she doesn't know that you feel this way, she's not going to want to marry you if you ask! i think that you need to tell her this. no matter if you feel that telling her this is corny, or telling her would make you seem weak...doesn't matter! she deserves to know! and if you don't tell her, then your going to lose her forever! the best of luck to you!
6. lame, dude ex's are ment to stay ex's. get over it, there are other girls out there. you will marry her and be thinking did i marry her out of love or loneliness, or whatever. better of finding someone new.