Belt Auction

Rate/Hate the bars..............?

Really not sure where this came from, just wrote down some lines. Had a lot of concepts going through my head but put them into one so, if you don't get it I understand I'm too tired to explain. Peace. Rate, hate, etc... Put me in lockdown this sectors mad Angels with feathers laugh, getting jumped because of my checkered past This is first never last, amazingly I fell from grace Looking for a better half, I arrive at these hellish gates So this is hell's estate, Satan's right in front of me I can tell I'm late He says I’m a fallen angel, ripped my wings off age eleven Saved with sevens, I’m still all sixes, I call it fables Slipped my ring off page the revered Playing with fate the cards fall on tables Taking a break the stars aren’t so able Tonight was the night I died Gun by my side, and a bullet right inside My left temple, now it’s all so clear I killed myself simple, I was drawn in fear Of becoming this devil people paint me as Take me bad, but the evil raised me past The state of well being, hell singing Being I was never well, meaning I always took hells belts beatings

Public Comments

1. 7.5 out of 10.It was pretty good..
2. I can put together the pieces knowing you as well as I do. I think you need to cheer up and try to enjoy the holidays. For writing and putting together metaphors and rhymes it's great...but it's really deep and grim. You're slipping back into the deep, deep, dark hole again. I understand it and think a lot of people can related to it. 8.7/10 Happy Holidays!!!
3. it's ok, they are parts that actual remind of some thing i wrote a couple months back (not saying you are biting, lol...no idea's original right?) anyway, it's good...and you can send me another verse if you want me to remix Threw My Eyes...
4. "getting jumped because of my checkered past" ^^LOL@Referring To Checkers This verse reminds me of a bunch of board and card games then it goes to a suicide sort of concept. 9/10 for referring to Checkers and 8.5/10 lyrically...You can find the mean of those 2 scores and see what you get lol