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My new rap sound any good?? Its basically saying noone is better than u!?

What makes you think your so much higher than me? What makes you believe, your a bigger achiever than me? You watch kids films that are rated PG When your little brothers next door watching a 18 And all its teaching him Is how to handle a gun, and how to smoke weed Tell me, what part of that childhood is good to be in Your mother's got a different man each week 50 percent of the time, they abuse you cos your weak They smash you down like your an antique The only power you ever get is when your at school When you enter them gates and realise your standing tall Nothing can stop you You would love to be able to fit in and be who you really are Explain your background life and turn into a star When your at home you know to not ask about your real fath-...er Youve got so many troubles in your family life Everyday its starts And it dont even stop at night So its just like, an ongoing game thats as far as ive got. is it any good??

Public Comments

1. No
2. Sounds good
3. Hey I like that mate. Good work. Keep going with it.
4. So you sit at home and write lyrics i see. Well this nor the last one got my attention. Keep at it though.
5. lol nooo i clearly see you do not understand lyrical rap
6. LMAO!
7. a bit corny, not rly catchy sry